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第一场雅思考试大作文解析!(雅思写作名师解析)

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第一场雅思考试大作文解析!(雅思写作名师解析)

反方会提出的两个方面是第一对于庭审的报道可能会曝光犯罪分子甚至于当庭作证的证人,他的隐私这会让他们至于危险当中,也就是我们经常会在社会中讨论的,我们为了报道一个事情满足了更多人的需求,但牺牲了某个人,对于西方的价值观念来说,他认为这对受害者是不公平的,甚至于在某种情况之下揭露犯罪分子的隐私,对于罪犯来说都是不公平的,也就是所谓的人权关怀。如果讨论的是犯罪细节的报道,又害怕在这一种报道当中过多的去曝光了犯罪细节之后,可能会被民众模仿,尤其是青少年儿童以及有着犯罪念头的潜在犯罪分子。

所以这个题目写中立写倾向两种结构都是给分的,但是大家要注意在倾向结构当中,应该对反方所谓报道细节之后会引发的问题,或者庭审曝光之后对人权的侵犯以及对社会犯罪造成的负面作用需要有所反驳。当然从问利弊的问题当中来说,只要题目没有明显的要求说讨论双方,我们也可以选择一边倒的结构,完全支持某一方的观点。

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A few criminal trials can be watched by the audience on the television in some nations, which may bring negative effects according to certain people. For example, the bloody pictures and immoral ways of behavior may leave the audiences with uncomfortable and disgusting impressions. But as far as I am concerned, the advantages of showing these criminal trials to the general public are more because of the two reasons below.

Firstly, showing the criminal trials on TV can teach people about laws and how to protect themselves from criminals. For example, younger generations, especially kinds and teenagers, sometimes can not tell right from wrong since they are so young. By watching these kind of criminal trials, they can get involved in the laws through real cases and learn from misfortunes of others rather than themselves, thus knowing the dos and don’t, following the laws and regulations of the society when they grow up in the future.

Secondly, showing the criminal trials can get the general public involved in the trial process and speculate the trial directly, letting them know what happened outside. For example, the audience from each places in the nation can never see one trial at the same time without the help of TV, government can have better communication with the general public from everywhere by showing the criminals trials on TV, thus the general public can have a speculation and know if it is fair or not.

To conclude, showing the criminals on TV will definitely bring more benefits for us than the negative impacts, such as teaching people about laws and regulations and get the public involved in the trial processes directly, which will do good for the general public as well as the governments.

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