Springismyfavoriteseason！Inspring,thetreestakeoutnewshoots,growpalegreenleaves.Thegrassontheplaygroundalsosneakoutofthehead,ontheplaygroundontheeastofthekapoktreeisfullofredflowers,likeescapingtheburningfire.Litchiandlonganalloverthetreeflowers,attractedalotofbees,thebeeshumming,withcolorfulflowersadornthecampus.Spring,thewillowbranchesinthebreezeandrainintheskyofthedyetothegreen,greenbudquietlycoveredwithwillowbranches.Springbreezeblowthewillowbranchesopen,gentlyashakeaput,itislikeabarber,withanenormouscombandscissorsforthelittlegirlshair.Ah,spring!Youdecoratetheearthwitharainbowofcolors;Yourtendercaresshasgivenrisetoallthings;Yousmellfreshbroughttolife.Iloveyou,thebeautifulspring!
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Springismyfavoriteseason！Inspring,thetreesputoutnewshoots,growpalegreenleaves.Thegrassonthegroundalsomadeabud,kapoktreeisfullofredflowers,liketheburningfire.Theflowersonthetreeattractalotofbees.Thebeesarehummingaroundfromflowertoflower.Spring,thewillowbranchesinthebreezeandrainintheskyofthedyetothegreen,greenbudquietlycoveredwithwillowbranches.Springbreezeblowthewillowbranchesopen,gentlyashakeaput,itislikeabarber,withanenormouscombandscissorsforthelittlegirlshair.Ah,spring!Youdecoratetheearthwitharainbowofcolors;Yourtendercareshasgivenrisetoallthings;Youmakelifealive.Iloveyou,thebeautifulspring!
修改老师：Crystal老师
六年级:何莹莹
