whenspringcomes,everythingisgreen.howbeautrfulthespring!thebreathofspring,embracespring!inspring.thegrassspitthebud,addedatracceofgreenforspring.theyarefullofvitality,growinthearmsofthespring.thousandsofthebirdschatteringtogetherwithmanyflowers,flowersdoo--yan.thechlidrenplayinginthebeautifulscenery,play.embracedinthespring.theriver,rowsofwillowyiyiaffectionate,blowinginthewind,gentlyswingingsongs,waterfowlgentlyjimponit,thewatershimmeringcorrugatedlines.letsembracetheincomprablybeautifuispring!
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Whenspringcomes,everythingturnsgreen.Howbeautifulthespringis!Inspring,treesbegintospitthebud,addingsomegreentospring.Theyarefullofvitality,growinginthearmsofthespring.Thousandsofbirdsarechatteringtogether.Thewindisblowinggently.Thechlidrenareplayinginthebeautifulscenery.Letsembracethebeautifuispring!
修改老师：Crystal老师
四年级:李名扬
